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You're Causing a Reaction by ~ViolentHysteria:iconViolentHysteria:



My hands reach through to your frail lips
Silence should be held in this therapy
Twilight in the California desert
This isn't going to last forever, baby.

My eyes are penetrating to your soul
Not through, but just enough to aggravate
I am a stranger to you and your life
And I will make sure to overstay my welcome.

An incendiary in this war for immersion
The beach is straining you to kiss me again
I'm going to make you tick like a bomb
I can feel your heartbeat going off like a grenade.

Close your eyes and I promise I'll lead you somewhere
It'll be something important, an agitation to your head
The sun's going down, baby, can you see it?
With your imagination running into the fireball?

I smell the napalm on your breath and taste it on your lips
Your skin is a refreshing, sweet whisp of sulfur
Burning into me as the acid washes away our fingerprints
Eternity never feels so long when I have you.

The arson continues, your hands burning me, melting me
We're molding together as the toxins run through our systems
Energetically unstable, I'm waiting for the meltdown
My legs are shaking, affecting our friction, morphing faster.

This reaction is like nitroglycerin, causing explosions in my mind
Radiation is breaching like a drug drilling into my lungs
The disonance of our situation is fantastic
Trapped in this deserted sand, watching a big fireball fall out of the sky.

We light up our cigarettes
Blown into the sun.
©2008-2009 ~ViolentHysteria
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Author's Comments

I'm in a mood for love and explosives. <3

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:icondjmatthias:
Interesting concept here...thought at first you were comparing your love to a nuclear holocaust, but when I finished I understood, so good job because the imagery was excellent.

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"Its better to be ones self then to walk life's path as a hollow shell." -Myself
:iconviolenthysteria:
Thank you very much. I tried to spend actual time on this one and apparently no one thinks it's very good. I didn't get much feedback.

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You know I won't say sorry. The pain has a bad reaction; a blend of fear and passion. You know what it's like to believe. It makes me want to scream.

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:icondjmatthias:
Maybe people didn't know what to say, it happens to me time and again. Don't judge the piece on feedback, because that makes everything you do based on others opinions.

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"Its better to be ones self then to walk life's path as a hollow shell." -Myself
:iconviolenthysteria:
I suppose...

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You know I won't say sorry. The pain has a bad reaction; a blend of fear and passion. You know what it's like to believe. It makes me want to scream.

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:iconromancing-the-broken:
If your poem was a boy, I would totally say "screw what my parents think" and lunge on him.
It's that good.
The imagery is amaaaaaaaazing.
I love it.
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Actually, I romancing.
:iconromancing-the-broken:
But you know what I mean.

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:iconviolenthysteria:
:D

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You know I won't say sorry. The pain has a bad reaction; a blend of fear and passion. You know what it's like to believe. It makes me want to scream.

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:iconromancing-the-broken:
:3

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Check out Sex Education by friskyspirit and join the revolution.
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:iconxero-sama:
This is incredible. I am in love with this poem... this is amazing!

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:iconviolenthysteria:
Thank you so much :]

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You know I won't say sorry. The pain has a bad reaction; a blend of fear and passion. You know what it's like to believe. It makes me want to scream.

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